Angel of Death

Hey there luccy!!! Here are some things that I liked... Rosaline and Jared are adorable together. I also like how both the couples are twins, it makes the story more ...

YAY!!! I was going to explode after chapter sixteen, especially since I didn't think you were going to post another chapter. I liked this wait...I loved it!! As you already ...

Hey KJ!! I've been waiting so long to read this. This was a good chapter, though it wasn't my favorite. It was intense and it took the story in another ...

This was beautifully written and I kinda envy you. I could never write something so short and sweet and flowing like this. It takes me pages and pages to write ...

I liked this song. I listen to a lot of pop and alternative, so I got that kinda sultry upbeat feel when I read it. The words flow nicely and ...

Thanks for the heads up! Castle and Lost kinda hit everything on the nose. Sorry I didn't get to read this right away, but anyways, all I'm going to say ...

I am back, my friend! This critique pretty much mirrors Ashley's. I liked this a lot, and I hope you continue this. Just add flashbacks of the dream or something ...

Hello again! Looks like all the grammatical errors have been taken care of, but yeah, when you're writing a story like this, make sure you alleviate the reader from too ...

'Ello there, Ash. Oh, this was such a lovely chapter, and no I have not lost interest. It might have been a long wait, but you didn't disappoint. There was ...

This was so good! I especially liked the end, it was so unexpected and you built up the suspense very well. Your names are so gorgeous and you have a ...

Hey there! Thanks for the friend request and I love your avi. This town is for people who aren't like me. I cant wait till i can go and i ...

Welp Kylan, looks like another masterpiece is walking around in these parts. I enjoyed this! Though I miss TEB, I can see myself growing to love this too. There were ...

'Ello there. I've never read anything of yours, but I just decided to go with this poem because I love the title and I just have a thing for poetry, ...

Hello there Jig, Well, I should resign from the contest, because this looks like a win. I have not an eye for grammatical or things of that sort, so hopefully ...

Hey Ash, Awe, this was too short and the cliffhanger! Please get writing soon. Its sad that they're going to hurt Sophia just because she's going out with a human. ...